The writing is funny, and the art is cute and charming.
However, the quirkiness of the music coupled with its short length, makes it repetitive and a bit hard to listen to for longer periods. The movement feels sluggish and unresponsive? I think it might be because it might be tile-based and the move speed is slow.
I hope my rating doesn't deter you from creating, because this is genuinely impressive work and I hope you keep at it! It was just playing this was un-fun for me personally, apologies